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I know your busy BUT..how would you change the world?
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Knowledge,..Drunkenness,..Misery,..Sickness,..Miserliness..and Robbery.
Love,*..the young maiden,..cherishes a true,..*deep affection..for the hero;
she dwells..in the same abode..with Frivolity,
who entertains..an unrequited love-sentiment..for Selfishness.
(Here is shown..the close association..in life of the Truth and Falsity.)
Truth enters..and proposes to Love,..who accepts him;
he then departs..and is followed*..by Selfishness,..who desires Love..*for himself.
When his advances are rejected,..Frivolity,..with her most fascinating coquetries,endeavors to charm the Ruffian..*(Selfishness)..from Love to herself.
This angers him and..he threatens her with death,
then leaves..in a rage,[must be..some ancient means..of travel..
[or travail]..as he is swearing to kill..his rival,..*Truth.
Love..writes a frantic note of warning..to her lover..and hastily sends her servant to
deliver the message.. but the servant arrives too late,..for Selfishness has attacked Truth by..the way-side..and fatally wounded him in a..s-word duel.
[see why i put off doing this
to me words are sacred..sacred/words..=..s/words
but its all so much drama]..but on with the show
Truth dies..a lingering death,
representing the murder..of man's higher nature..by self-ishness.
The servant hurries back to his mistress..with the news of the death of her lover.
She..rushes to the place of the attack..and,
finding Truth dead,..falls on her knees beside him.
[this would be so much easier..if you got it now
not have to sit through drama's like these later]
..With a prayer..she draws her dagger..and stabbing herself,..dies.
[see here i would put in the truth of death transition..but back to the script]
When Selfishness..sees that Love,..*as well as
Truth,..is dead he becomes infuriated,..[hey a transition..
yet another oppertuinity to explain..crossing over...missed]
[infuriated..'selfishness]..declares there is no God
and..swears that he will..have fullest revenge.
[this is a drink..best served in small cups]
[infuriated selfishness...high on revenge]...then
..An officer,..Justice,..[who comes to get just-us]..arrives,
and handcuffing the murderer,..
and takes him..[the multiple transitory..*infuriated..high on revenge...selfishness]..*into custody,..after which follows..
the funeral..of the lovers...[truth..and love]