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I like many of your ideas.
I suggest that you get someone to edit it - syntax needs a little attention.
I suggest too that each section be expanded. I'd like to understand how you arrived at your opinions and it would add extra interest to the work.
The quotes are a nice touch but some would be more meaningful and make a more interesting contrast if the sections were longer.
I like your range of topics.
thanks again for sharing it,
pynch